Firsts on Friday is my little game to get your creative juice’s flowing. I give you a first and I want you to write a story from it. Today’s first is, what is your first memory.
It was quiet except for the sobs coming from my parents bathroom. I knew I was supposed to stay in bed, but I was curious. I slipped off my bunk bed and crept toward my bedroom door feeling the multi green shag carpet under my feet, my nightgown still wrapped around me. I slowly opened my door and noticed my parents door shut but could still hear my mom crying. My four year old heart was saddened to hear my mom but I know she cried like this most of the time. I heard muffled voices in the kitchen and decided to make my way down our hall. My room was at the end of the hall with my parents room to the right of me and my older sister to the left. I didn’t want either of them to hear me so I opted to walk closest to my mom’s bedroom door the floor didn’t squeak as loud on that side of the hall. The dim kitchen light was a beacon and a deterrent. I wanted to see who was in the kitchen and at the same time I was afraid. My older brother came out of the kitchen just as I reached the bathroom door. He didn’t notice me as he hurriedly ran down the stairs. The voices stopped but I could still hear movement and so my curiosity kept me moving. I walked into the kitchen, not seeing anyone there. I walked past the desk that was against the south wall and came into view of our dinning area. The cold linoleum under my feet I turned toward my dad who was sitting in one of our chairs at the table. He had his guitar and was placing it in his case. A bag sat next to him on the floor and his boots were on his feet. His cowboy hat sat on top of our table and that is when I realized my dad was leaving. I walked over towards him, my right hand playing with my lips as I always did when I was scared or nervous. My dad looked really mad, but his face softened a bit as I moved towards him.
“Where are you going dad?”
“Your mom has asked me to not live here anymore so I am going to go and stay with Stevie.”
With that my dad stood up with his guitar case in hand and bag in the other. He grabbed his hat off the table and walked past me. He stopped and turned back around to face me then he kneeled down next to me. He reached out his arms and embraced me. A quick kiss on the forehead and he was back on his feet and out the kitchen door.
“Don’t leave daddy!” I yelled as I chased him out of the kitchen.
He was already down the stairs with the door open. He shut the door without another word and I began to cry. My brother was next to me in a flash, I don’t even know how he got there so fast. He was always there to protect me and comfort me. He picked me up and held me as he walked me back to my room. I sobbed in his arms, but knew that my brother loved me and that comforted me.
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She hopped of her mother’s lap and pressed her face into the screen. Her nose smushed flat, her tongue feeling the bumps. Her daddy climbed out of the station wagon and called, “How’s my girls?”
The screen door slammed behind her as she jumped off the porch and into the lush green grass. “Daddy!”
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By Sarah Jensen on 03.06.09 10:01 pm | Permalink
The dark water was murky, but the sun was shining. I stepped up to the edge of the dock, shaking with fear. Was there really an alligator in this lake? Was he friendly? My uncle took out a piece of bread and touched the water… slowly the baby alligator came up to the dock and took the bread from his hands….
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By ~Jamie on 03.07.09 11:19 pm | Permalink
Walking along the red dirt road, with the heart-shaped, papery, pipal leaves flapping, fluttering, falling in the burning summer wind all around us.
Walking each step after thirsty step, a ragged doll in one hand, my mother’s hand in the other, our faces wrapped in white cloth like surrealist paintings of Arab women in the dusty haze that rises from the ground.
Creaking the gate open, running up the steps to catch the shade under jasmine vines. A touch of cool air, fragrance, at last. We are back home from my daycare.
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By Damyanti on 03.08.09 8:26 am | Permalink
The engine revs and the wind whips my blonde hair into my face. I brush it away as it sticks to my lips, my other hand gripping the tailgate. We’re flying backwards. The tall grass beats at our bare legs- stinging a little. The black seeds get caught in our once white socks. I look at our legs held out next to each other- tan and dirt stained. The grasshoppers song is a constant buzz in the hot, humid air. Summer is my favorite time. I lay my head back and let the sun’s rays kiss my cheeks and eyelids, careful to hold on tighter. With my eyes closed, we are speeding at a faster pace. I hear Cooter running along side us, his breath coming in fast pants. I glance over to see him dodging the tall grass, tongue wagging, his black and white coat hardly visible. Chris grabs the black wire running from the blue tailgate to the bed as the truck dips down. Our feet drag the red dirt and our breaths catch in our throats. Our stomachs plunge for a tiny second. I scramble to grab the identical wire on the opposite side and turn to catch Dad’s quick smile in the side mirror. This is our biggest thrill.
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By Liz on 03.08.09 12:42 pm | Permalink
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