Since Eden’s post on Friday was so helpful, I thought it’d be appropriate to do a critique using her advice.
Email your first five sentences of any WiP to ifyougiveagirl@gmail.com by Saturday June 27th and I’ll post them Sunday June 28th.
This is not a contest, so it’s open to all Girls With Pens as well!
Remember to look at the rules Eden specified and we’ll all be as helpful as we can!
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I’ve sent mine. I look forward to reading everyone’s and to the comments I’ll receive.
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By Sarah on 06.21.09 5:40 pm | Permalink
I sent mine, as well.
I’m looking forward to any responses!!!!
This is a good idea, Liz =)
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By Eden on 06.21.09 11:48 pm | Permalink
Sent mine! I also posted on my blog – hope that was ok
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By Steena on 06.22.09 12:35 am | Permalink
Sent in a little something too! It’s a little strange seeing the first five out of context… interesting experiment.
Looking forward to seeing everyone’s pieces!
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By Jen on 06.23.09 4:51 pm | Permalink
ok, finally got mine sent. Can’t wait to read them. Mine is so rough! Sorry about that.
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By Brenna on 06.24.09 11:25 am | Permalink
[...] ***First Five Sentence Critique starts tomorrow so email your entry in today!*** [...]
By If You Give a Girl a Pen… » Blog Archive » How not to write a query–Contest on 06.27.09 11:48 am | Permalink
You’re blogging has really come on when I look back over previous posts. Actually I arrived here from a forum on an unrelated topic. Worth surfing sometimes. Thanks.
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By Lamont Notoma on 04.18.11 11:54 am | Permalink
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