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]]> By: Joyce http://giveagirlapen.com/revising-manuscripts/a-random-number-of-tips/comment-page-1#comment-991 Joyce Sat, 15 Aug 2009 20:26:47 +0000 http://giveagirlapen.com/?p=1458#comment-991 I just finished working on my chapter endings and totally agree with #6. I hope they leave you wanting to turn the page instead of tying that part of the story in a neat little bow. I just finished working on my chapter endings and totally agree with #6. I hope they leave you wanting to turn the page instead of tying that part of the story in a neat little bow.

]]> By: Sarah http://giveagirlapen.com/revising-manuscripts/a-random-number-of-tips/comment-page-1#comment-984 Sarah Fri, 14 Aug 2009 18:09:15 +0000 http://giveagirlapen.com/?p=1458#comment-984 This is great advice, and I wholeheartedly agree with it. I'd like to add one more, and yep, it's the theatre gal in me, but act out scenes. Don't just read them out loud. If you're having trouble with dialogue and action, get up and act it out. You can come up with things for your characters to do while they speak. This way, not everyone is doing the same thing, or one character doesn't do just one or two things. Like, Andrew for instance, doesn't only run his fingers through his hair, he has other actions with his dialogue. :) This is great advice, and I wholeheartedly agree with it.

I’d like to add one more, and yep, it’s the theatre gal in me, but act out scenes. Don’t just read them out loud.

If you’re having trouble with dialogue and action, get up and act it out. You can come up with things for your characters to do while they speak.

This way, not everyone is doing the same thing, or one character doesn’t do just one or two things. Like, Andrew for instance, doesn’t only run his fingers through his hair, he has other actions with his dialogue. :)

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