Hidden tips that your book MIGHT need some work…

The best way to get objective, honest feedback no doubt comes from a professional editor. But let me tell ya, I checked into that. Editors are expensive!

Sometimes we are blessed to find a great critique group or friend to help us edit. If we are REALLY lucky we get someone who will tell us how it is, without having to pay for it! But let’s be honest, not all of us are lucky enough to find someone in the industry that gives the right kind of feedback.

Although friends and family are GREAT to boost your ego and tell you how wonderful your book is and how every little edit has made the book a sure fire seller, they aren’t the best people to take advice from.

So what’s a writer to do? How can we tell if our book is really ready or worthy to get published?

Here are some good indicators that your book may need some help…

1. You’ve found a few beta readers who are also writers. They were super excited to read your novel, but two chapters in…they stop reading and suddenly you aren’t hearing from them. It’s possible your book may need some help. If they aren’t begging for more, chances are, you’re not hooking them enough.

2. You’ve broken down and sent out tons of query letters. You’ve been reassured that your query is flawless, but you are still getting form rejections. It’s a good indication that your book may need some help. If your first chapters are not able to get you any type of feedback, chances are, you’re not hooking them enough.

3. Your friends and family aren’t too excited to keep up with your changes, updates and edits. In short, they are bored. Friends and family are usually our BEST critics, if we can’t hook them our book DEFINITELY needs help!

If you have experienced any of these my best advice is to work on the beginning of your story. Make it full of hooks and impossible to set down. Just like Julie Andrews said, “Lets start at the very beginning, a very good place to start!” (Oh how I love The Sound of Music!)

Have you ran into any other signs that make you sit back and think, “Maybe my book needs a little more help?”

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Marybeth Smith
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Marybeth is an aspiring novelist currently working on her second novel. For more information visit her website www.marybethsmith.com. She also has a blog Desperately Searching for my Inner Mary Poppins where you can keep up on her moments as mother, wife and writer..



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This is why the first part of my book is out to an editor right now. We’ll see what happens…
And I have my work up on Authonomy.com, the first 10k.. I’ve had 200 comments from that, so that’s been helpful.

One thing about the betas, though. Some might just be bad, like me. Slackers lol. I’m reading one right now that i Love, i just don’t have time to finish it. Heck, I haven’t even had the time to tell the writer I like it yet am behind. I should go do that when I finish this comment, huh?!

Yes, the beginning is important, and I’ve found that once you get that part down and you’re confident in it, you can better form your later chapters and keep the reader hooked.

Great post!!

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I like this list. It’s kind of like that comedy act, “here’s your sign.”

“Your beta readers have blocked your email address–here’s your sign.” :)

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Thanks Eden! I’ve thought about Authonomy …just haven’t done it yet.

Too funny Roni! Than made my day :D

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