Trash or Treasure?

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Stephen King notes in his book “On Writing” that a good revision will cut 10% of a novel.  10%?  WOW!  I was floored until I realized that after my revisions on Haunting Anne my word-count went from 90,000 to 80,000.  So, in my case, he was right.

But what happens to all those words we cut?  All those unnecessary chapters?  What happens to our “little darlings”… you know, the ones we killed?  We lose characters, paragraphs, scenes.  Is it wasted?  Was it garbage all along?

NO! :)   It is treasure!  Well, at least some of it is.  As authors we have to learn from the environmentalists:  Recycle! Reuse! Save the goodies for your next novel!

When I began to plot out the prequel to my novel I realized I already had three chapters, two fully developed characters and almost 15K words to kick start the writing.  Glorious! Treasure found.

How about you?  Have you ever cut something while editing that you used (or are thinking of using) somewhere else?

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Definitely! I always keep a file of my cut material. Some of it does get permanently deleted, but a lot of it gets used at some point, somewhere. My novels always tend to end up as very different stories than when they began. So that cut material is, like you said, often used in other books. It’s fun to start a new project and already have a huge start with cut material from something else :)

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I started a new book because I had a group of character that just didn’t work for another. They didn’t advance the story along in the first book, but I liked the characters, so they get a novel of their own. ;)

Yep, some’s a treasure!

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I cut paragraphs and chapters all the time and stow them away in separate files for later use! It’s like putting left-overs in the fridge and eating them later ;) Instant word count!

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I’m with everybody else on this. In the folder in Microsoft Word where I save the documents, I always have a document titled “omitted sections”. I’ve been known to delve through those from time to time when working on a new project. : )

S

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I’m dealing with this right now – so perfect timing for me! There’s a section that works its way through out my novel, but I’m starting to wonder if it’s necessary, if I need it. Unfortunately – it begins at the very start of my book, so cutting it is hard.

But I LOVE the idea of keeping a separate folder for ‘deleted’ sections – what a fantastic idea!

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I date save, so I always have whatever I wrote on any given day. Yes, I have lots of files, but I’ve found many a gem in those files. Things I use in later chapters, or great sentences that don’t quite fit in that story, but are perfect for another one.

Great post!!

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Oh, and I also have a ‘deleted scenes’ folder, like Scott, along with a ‘great sentences to use elsewhere’ folder.
HelpfulHelpful!!

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I date save mine too. If they’re big changes, not just nitpicks.
But a great sentence folder. I’m gonna have to do one of those. Or great scenes. I like that idea!

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I do have a “deleted scenes” file, but a lot of what I end up cutting is actually unnecessary. One of my favorite writing professors stressed the removal of words that don’t move the sentence – and the story – forward. In a first draft, I’ll typically have a lot of fluff, so part of my editing is just going through to remove a lot of adverbs and half the uses of “rather.”

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