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	<title>If You Give a Girl a Pen... &#187; revising</title>
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		<title>In the Land of Edits</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Dec 2009 11:52:38 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Marybeth</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Once upon a time, in a land far away, when a girl couldn&#8217;t catch a break or a snow day, a book was completed and editing had began everywhere. The characters grew nervous, afraid to be cut. The plot bit it&#8217;s fingers, desperately hoping it&#8217;s holes would not be seen. After all, how embarrassing is [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Once upon a time, in a land far away, when a girl couldn&#8217;t catch a break or a snow day, a book was completed and editing had began everywhere. The characters grew nervous, afraid to be cut. The plot bit it&#8217;s fingers, desperately hoping it&#8217;s holes would not be seen. After all, how embarrassing is it to be filled with gaping holes and missing moments? But the worst off in the land was the author. She had sent off the entire manuscript to be critiqued for the first time. She knew the characters well and she felt dearly close to the plot. The moment the hit send and her characters were gone her stomach filled with butterflies and a wave of nausea hit her from behind. It was pure agony. She would now have to sit back like a mom who had just sent her baby to school for the first time and wait for her characters and plot to return. She hoped they would not get beaten up or mocked. She longed for them to be well received and loved. After all, she had crafted them so gently.</p>
<p>So she sat and she waited, and waited, and waited&#8230;.</p>
<p>To be continued&#8230;</p>
<p>P.S. I&#8217;m the author! Waiting is the name of the game and I&#8217;m STILL nauseous. How did you feel the first time you first sent your manuscript off to be critiqued?</p>
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		<title>Keys to Great Writing</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Dec 2009 03:23:22 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Damyanti</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[On my writing desk, I put up things that help me write from time to time. Recently, I found a book by Stephen Wilbers, called &#8221; KEYS TO CREATIVE WRITING&#8221; and the two pages I find most helpful, I have photocopied and laid down on my desk where I can see them as I write. [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>On my writing desk, I put up things that help me write from time to time. Recently, I found a book by  <a title="Keys to Great Writing Wilbers" href="http://www.wilbers.com/titles.htm" target="_blank">Stephen Wilbers</a>, called <strong>&#8221; KEYS TO CREATIVE WRITING&#8221; </strong>and the two pages I find most helpful, I have photocopied and laid down on my desk where I can see them as I write.</p>
<p>I have scanned them for you, in order to share. You can read few pages <a title="Google books Key to Great writing" href="http://books.google.com.my/books?id=TsLGFoZeKeAC&amp;dq=Keys+to+Great+Writing+Stephen+Wilbers&amp;printsec=frontcover&amp;source=bl&amp;ots=4700-f0HzJ&amp;sig=yekIG90lL_Jq6hTJIRfrMlLf1Js&amp;hl=en&amp;ei=AxcfS4pa0YeQBePPreAK&amp;sa=X&amp;oi=book_result&amp;ct=result&amp;resnum=4&amp;ved=0CCAQ6AEwAw#v=onepage&amp;q=&amp;f=false" target="_blank">here</a>. But I would urge any writer be it fiction, or non-fiction to go and <a title="Keys to Great Writing" href="http://www.amazon.com/Keys-Great-Writing-Stephen-Wilbers/dp/0898799325" target="_blank">buy the book</a>. This would probably be a good investment for all writers and writer-wannabes out there, because it contains detailed info not only on writing a piece, but more importantly, on re-writing and editing it to perfection.</p>
<p>So here you go:</p>
<div id="attachment_2094" class="wp-caption aligncenter" style="width: 533px"><img class="size-full wp-image-2094" src="http://giveagirlapen.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/12/Keys-to-Great-Writing-I.jpg" alt="Excerpt from &quot;Keys to Great Writing&quot;" width="523" height="845" /><p class="wp-caption-text">Excerpt from &quot;Keys to Great Writing&quot;</p></div>
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		<title>Wait before you send</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Mar 2009 02:11:37 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Damyanti</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[But patience is a virtue I'm having to learn, with every story I write.

Sometimes, it is all about waiting for the idea to ferment, at others it is waiting for the next scene to form in my head.


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<p>I have all sorts of errands and assignments chasing my tail today, so I&#8217;ll do another &#8220;link post&#8221;. Sigh. I hope I&#8217;m better-organized next Monday! So, here goes:</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve never been very patient in most things I&#8217;ve done. While in my kitchen, it irks me no end that some cakes take ages to bake once in the oven, or that the pasta takes 10minutes to boil. But patience is a virtue I&#8217;m having to learn, with every story I write.</p>
<p>Sometimes, it is all about waiting for the idea to ferment, at others it is waiting for the next scene to form in my head.</p>
<p>At others, it is about putting away something I&#8217;ve written to look at another day. And this is the hardest kind of waiting. It is also the most essential. To know why, <a title="Writing on waiting" href="http://amloki.blogspot.com/2008/05/fiction-writing-playing-waiting-game.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>read more here</strong></span></a>.</p>
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